Friday, December 28, 2007

A Rainy day

As I enjoy the cool afternoon breeze,
past the sun i see the dark clouds wheeze,
I hear the rattling in the sky,
as a drop falls on the lid of my eye,
Sometimes i ponder whether its a bad sign,
that makes the rain God cry and whine,
or does his mouth water,
due to some baker's butter,

And there comes the lightning,

giving an appearance thats quite frightening,
between the dark clouds it does appear,
asking us to be happier,
coz wherever we feel the answer is "nope",
there will always be a silver lining of hope,

Now i hear the thunder,
cant it be a little bit tender,
Never should this evoke fear,
as this is a sign to cheer,
and fight our battle with all our might
because "barking dogs" seldom bite.

Finally does appear the rainbow,
telling us that the benefits we reap are for those which we sow.

5 comments:

rihdus said...

good work da .. keep it goin ... tho u r not wordsworth ur words are worth . u deserve 65 marks .. could have done better thats wat i feel i mean u are capable.. sure.. u will ...

Unknown said...

ji first congrats for starting ur blog....... ur poem was nice..... start writing poems on sensitive issues ji.... they ll surely become hit...... all the best.

Unknown said...

GILLLI GIRI.... Wat else to say.. Gr8 work mama... Second poem really had de feel in it...
Keep going n keep rockin...
Al de very best...

GAYATHRI said...

nice one!!:))

test said...

coz wherever we feel the answer is "nope",
there will always be a silver lining of hope,


these lines were brilliant... hey i found ur blog only today... wil come back often... i actually love reading poems which look like an anecdote.. this is one like that